THE THOUGHT !

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But, from where then comes the far-flung thought;

the illusive relic of a half done dream?

Light peeps in like a web, and am caught-

fascinated by the bright high beam.

Beyond the horizons, the light dims,

and can almost grab, but concealed.

A Gush of wind swept away the dreams,

Where the thoughts kept laboured.

Becalmed the cat's paw touch of breeze,

will give my sail a shake and tease.

And drive me down to my knees,

to pen 'it' down to its ease. 

But, from where then comes the far-flung thought? 


Linto...

 

 

Comments

  1. Anonymous5 July 2024 at 06:55

    This thought beautifully captures the fleeting nature of thoughts and dreams using vivid imagery and a reflective tone. The interplay of light and wind symbolizes moments of clarity and the elusive nature of inspiration. The cyclical structure, ending with the initial question, underscores the ongoing quest to understand and articulate these ephemeral ideas. Lovely thoughts

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  2. Anonymous6 July 2024 at 00:58

    Awesome 👌

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  3. Anonymous6 July 2024 at 06:04

    Super sir

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