Volition
Perfection bores those souls who attain,
In sleeker surfaces, those they should refrain from.
Life sending in the shining objects beyond compare,
And lures into while an unkept edge pops up, with a blunted score.
And like an athlete trained in new sneakers,
Outplayed in the race to one in old sneakers.
History epitomised the episode of Eve’s life exam,
Distressed, we find an erroneous soul in open palm.
Her choice remained mere individual stunt, yet unique,
And serpent hung aloft sublimely pique.
A lofty contrast welcome change, proposed he,
Dangling down hissed curiously at Eve,
Awaking her to something discordant,
From the mundane perfection of contentment.
And she stared at the curious snake,
Who cocked his body winsome for her sake.
She is the first seek experience,
redeeming cycle to an act of innocence.
And churns today within everyone,
Upwelling emerging like a bright rising Sun.
Assuming imperfection of life’s melancholy,
Stands necessary to break the cacophony.
Allowing all the fallen to redeem,
In-turn creates the note in soul’s gleam.
Life continues to get lured into,
Allegedly erroneous volitions.
Who can redeem me from this plight?
ReplyDeleteStunning poem! You skillfully explore the tension between perfection and imperfection, inviting readers to embrace life's complexities. Beautiful language, rich imagery, and thought-provoking themes. Well done!
ReplyDeleteYour poem beautifully captures the charm of imperfection and the richness it brings to life, creating a thought-provoking and wonderfully crafted piece. I am curious how your words celebrate curiosity and the beauty of the unconventional—such a powerful and inspiring reflection!
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